Kaohsiung Harbor, the largest international port in Taiwan and the third big container terminal of the world, is located in the southwest of Kaohsiung. The port is vast, the hinterland is wide and the weather is warm. There are a strip of sand bar near the sea, an advantageous geography, and a natural bay. Nowadays, due to the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers and the entire length of the navigation channel covers 18 kilometers, large ships below 10 thousand tons are allowed getting in and out.
1. ...THIRD BIGGEST CONTAINER HARBOR IN THE WORLD.
2. "There are a strip of sand bar near the sea, an advantageous geography, and a natural bay."
IT SOUNDS LIKE 高雄港有三寶：沿海沙洲、有利的地理、以及一個自然的海灣。(與原文有異)
THE HARBOR COVERS A WIDE AREA WITH A VAST HINTERLAND.
2. "due to the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers and the entire length of the navigation channel covers 18 kilometers, large ships below 10 thousand tons are allowed getting in and out." 邏輯有誤
due to the wide water area covered by the harbor...
due to the fact that...
"due to" 後面不可接句子，只可接名詞片語等；如要接句子，可用due to the fact that...
Kaohsiung Harbor is located in the southwest of Kaohsiung. It is the biggest international harbor of Taiwan and also the third largest container port of the world. The dockland is broad, the hinterland is wide, and the weather is pleasant. Due to the fact that there are long and narrow sand bars and the gulf is natural, the location is advantageous. Now day the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers and the navigation channel covers 18 kilometers, so it is able to carry a giant steamer under 100 thousand tons.
Port of Kaohsiung , the biggest international port and the third big container terminal of the world, is located in southwestern Kaohsiung. The area is vast, the hinterland is extensive, and the climate is temperate here. There are long and narrow sand bars in coast. Geographical condition here is ascendant, and gulf is formed naturally. The water area covers 26.66 square kilometers, the navigation channel covers 18 kilometers now. This port is available for giant steamship under 100 thousand tons
Kaohsiung Harbor, the largest international port in Taiwan and the third largest container port, is situated in the southwest end of Kaohsiung City.The port is spacious, the hinterland is vast, and the climate is moderate. There is a long and narrow sandbank which makes it a natural harbor. Besides, the geography position is also one of its advantages. Nowadays the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers, and the whole navigation channel spans 18 kilometers which can accommodates ships of less than 100,000 tons.
Kaohsiung Harbor, the largest international port in Taiwan and the third largest container port, is situated in the southwest of Kaohsiung City. The port is wide, the hinterland is vast, and the climate is warm. There is a long and narrow sand bar which makes it a natural harbor. The geography position is the other one of its advantages. Today in the port have the waters area 26.66 square kilometers and the route span 18 kilometers. That may supply 100,000 ton below huge ship get in and out.
Kaohsiung Harbor, the largest international port in Taiwan and the third largest container port of the world which is located in southwestern of Kaohsiung. The port is vast, the hinterland is wide, and the climate is moderate. There are long and narrow sand bars which gulf is natural. Geographical condition is advantageous.Nowadays the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers, the navigation channel covers 18 kilometers. This port is able to carry a giant steamship under 100 thousand tons.
Kaohsiung harbor located at southwest of Kaohsiung, and it’s the biggest International Harbor in Taiwan also is the third largest Container Harbor in the World. The Harbor is broad; the hinterland is wide; weather is warm; there is long and narrow sandbar near the sea. The geographic condition is superior; gulf terrain is natural. Now the water area covered 26.66km2; navigation channel is 18 km and below 10 thousand tons freighters can get in and out through it.
1. Kaohsiung harbor, located IN THE southwest of Kaohsiung, IS the biggest International Harbor in Taiwan AND the third largest Container Harbor in the World. The Harbor COVERS A WIDE AREA, the hinterland is wide, AND THE weather is warm. THERE is A long and narrow sandbar ALONG THE COAST, WHICH PROVIDES EXCELLENT NATURAL geographic conditionS FOR THE HARBOR. Now the water area IS UP TO 26.66km2; navigation channel SPANS 18 km and SHIPS UNDER ONE HUNDRED thousand tons can get in and out. (...AND IT CAN ACCOMMODATE SHIPS UNDER...)
Kaohiung harbor is located to the southwest of Kaohiung city, which is the largest international port in Taiwan, and the third largest container port in the world. It covers a wide area, has a vast hinterland, and the weather is warm. Shielded by a long narrow sandbar, this harbor has excellent geographic conditions as a world class harbor. Currently, it covers water area of up to 26.66 square kilometers, and its navigation channel spans 18 kilometers, which can accommodate large ships of under 100,000 tons.
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F4A 1094301013 May Chen
Kaohsiung City Tourism Guide
Tourist Sites
Kaohsiung Harbor, the largest international port in Taiwan and the third big container terminal of the world, is located in the southwest of Kaohsiung. The port is vast, the hinterland is wide and the weather is warm. There are a strip of sand bar near the sea, an advantageous geography, and a natural bay. Nowadays, due to the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers and the entire length of the navigation channel covers 18 kilometers, large ships below 10 thousand tons are allowed getting in and out.
To May:
1. ...THIRD BIGGEST CONTAINER HARBOR IN THE WORLD.
2. "There are a strip of sand bar near the sea, an advantageous geography, and a natural bay."
IT SOUNDS LIKE 高雄港有三寶：沿海沙洲、有利的地理、以及一個自然的海灣。(與原文有異)
THE HARBOR COVERS A WIDE AREA WITH A VAST HINTERLAND.
2. "due to the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers and the entire length of the navigation channel covers 18 kilometers, large ships below 10 thousand tons are allowed getting in and out." 邏輯有誤
due to the wide water area covered by the harbor...
due to the fact that...
"due to" 後面不可接句子，只可接名詞片語等；如要接句子，可用due to the fact that...
Kaohsiung City Tourism Guide
Tourist Sites
Kaohsiung Harbor is located in the southwest of Kaohsiung. It is the biggest international harbor of Taiwan and also the third largest container port of the world. The dockland is broad, the hinterland is wide, and the weather is pleasant. Due to the fact that there are long and narrow sand bars and the gulf is natural, the location is advantageous. Now day the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers and the navigation channel covers 18 kilometers, so it is able to carry a giant steamer under 100 thousand tons.
To Kun:
1. "Due to the fact that there are long and narrow sand bars and the gulf is natural, the location is advantageous."
THE LOGIC IN THE ABOVE SENTENCE SOUNDS NOT AGREEABLE TO THE THAT IN THE SOURCE TEXT.
2. "Now day the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers..."
NOWADAYS THE WATER AREA COVERS...
3. "ACCOMMODATE" IS BETTER THAN "CARRY."
F4A 1094301004 Jo Shen 沈奕君
高雄市觀光旅遊指南
Kaohsiung City Tourism Guide
景點旅遊
Tourist Sites
高雄港位於本市西南端，是台灣最大的國際港埠，也是世界第三大貨櫃港；港區遼闊，腹地廣，氣候溫暖，臨海有狹長沙洲，地理條件優越，海灣形勢天成；現今港內水域面積26.66平方公里，航道全長18公里，可供10萬噸以下巨輪進出。
Port of Kaohsiung , the biggest international port and the third big container terminal of the world, is located in southwestern Kaohsiung. The area is vast, the hinterland is extensive, and the climate is temperate here. There are long and narrow sand bars in coast. Geographical condition here is ascendant, and gulf is formed naturally. The water area covers 26.66 square kilometers, the navigation channel covers 18 kilometers now. This port is available for giant steamship under 100 thousand tons
F4A . 1094301044 . Yu En
高雄市觀光旅遊指南
Kaohsiung City Tourism Guide
景點旅遊
Tourist Sites
高雄港位於本市西南端，是台灣最大的國際港埠，也是世界第三大貨櫃港；港區遼闊，腹地廣，氣候溫暖，臨海有狹長沙洲，地理條件優越，海灣形勢天成；現今港內水域面積26.66平方公里，航道全長18公里，可供10萬噸以下巨輪進出。
Kaohsiung Harbor, the largest international port in Taiwan and the third largest container port, is situated in the southwest end of Kaohsiung City.The port is spacious, the hinterland is vast, and the climate is moderate. There is a long and narrow sandbank which makes it a natural harbor. Besides, the geography position is also one of its advantages. Nowadays the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers, and the whole navigation channel spans 18 kilometers which can accommodates ships of less than 100,000 tons.
G4B 1094302074 Bessy Chang
Kaohsiung City Tourism Guide
Tourist Sites
Kaohsiung Harbor, the largest international port in Taiwan and the third largest container port, is situated in the southwest of Kaohsiung City. The port is wide, the hinterland is vast, and the climate is warm. There is a long and narrow sand bar which makes it a natural harbor. The geography position is the other one of its advantages. Today in the port have the waters area 26.66 square kilometers and the route span 18 kilometers. That may supply 100,000 ton below huge ship get in and out.
To Joe:
1. "Port of Kaohsiung ,"
KAOHIUNG HARBOR,
(HARBOR SOUNDS LARGER THAN PORT)
2. "the biggest international port"
WHICH IS THE LARGEST INTERNATIONAL HARBOR IN TAIWAN, THE THIRD LARGEST CONTAINER PORT IN THE WORLD.
3. "The area is vast, the hinterland is extensive, and the climate is temperate here."
IT IS NOTED FOR ITS VAST AREA, EXTENSIVE HINTERLAND, AND MODERATE CLIMATE.
4. "in coast."
...ALONG (PARALLEL TO) THE COAST.
5. "Geographical condition here is ascendant, and gulf is formed naturally."
...THAT (WHICH) FORMS A NATURAL BAY FOR THE HARBOR.
譯為中文時，有時需要重組原文句子的順序 -- 合理化
TO YU:
1. "the third largest container port,"
, THE THIRD LARGEST CONTAINER HARBOR IN THE WORLD.
2. "the geography position is also one of its advantages."
似與原文語意不合
THE UNPARALLELED GEOGRAPHIC CONDITIONS OUTSTAND IT AS THE BEST BUSINESS HARBOR IN TAIWAN.
3. GOOD TRANSLATION! KEEP AT IT!
Kaohsiung Harbor, the largest international port in Taiwan and the third largest container port of the world which is located in southwestern of Kaohsiung. The port is vast, the hinterland is wide, and the climate is moderate. There are long and narrow sand bars which gulf is natural. Geographical condition is advantageous.Nowadays the water area covers 26.66 square kilometers, the navigation channel covers 18 kilometers. This port is able to carry a giant steamship under 100 thousand tons.
G4A 1094302015 Lianne Li
Kaohsiung harbor located at southwest of Kaohsiung, and it’s the biggest International Harbor in Taiwan also is the third largest Container Harbor in the World. The Harbor is broad; the hinterland is wide; weather is warm; there is long and narrow sandbar near the sea. The geographic condition is superior; gulf terrain is natural. Now the water area covered 26.66km2; navigation channel is 18 km and below 10 thousand tons freighters can get in and out through it.
To Bessy:
1. "The port is wide,"
THE PORT COVERS A LARGE AREA
2. "The geography position is the other one of its advantages."
"POSITION" SEEMS NOT A PROPER WORD TO ANSWER THE SOURCE TEXT -- THE ABOVE OUTSTANDING GEOGRAPHIC CONDITIONS OFFER ANOTHER ADVANTAGE TO THIS HARBOR.
3."Today in the port have the waters area 26.66 square kilometers and the route span 18 kilometers."
TODAY THE PORT HAS ...OF WATER AREA AND ITS NEVAGATION CHANNEL SPANS....
4. "That may supply 100,000 ton below huge ship get in and out."
IT CAN ACCOMMODATE LARGE SHIPS OF MORE THAN 100,000 TONS.
To Lianne,
1. Kaohsiung harbor, located IN THE southwest of Kaohsiung, IS the biggest International Harbor in Taiwan AND the third largest Container Harbor in the World. The Harbor COVERS A WIDE AREA, the hinterland is wide, AND THE weather is warm. THERE is A long and narrow sandbar ALONG THE COAST, WHICH PROVIDES EXCELLENT NATURAL geographic conditionS FOR THE HARBOR. Now the water area IS UP TO 26.66km2; navigation channel SPANS 18 km and SHIPS UNDER ONE HUNDRED thousand tons can get in and out. (...AND IT CAN ACCOMMODATE SHIPS UNDER...)
有進步了！
看看大寫的字詞。
To Carol:
1. Pretty good translation except for the following:
"There are long and narrow sand bars which gulf is natural. Geographical condition is advantageous."
(ACTUALLY, THERE IS ONLY ONE LONG AND NARROW SANDBAR OUTSIDE OF THE HARBOR, WHICH IS 旗津)
This bonus translation exercise is closed!
Reference translation:
Kaohiung Harbor
Kaohiung harbor is located to the southwest of Kaohiung city, which is the largest international port in Taiwan, and the third largest container port in the world. It covers a wide area, has a vast hinterland, and the weather is warm. Shielded by a long narrow sandbar, this harbor has excellent geographic conditions as a world class harbor. Currently, it covers water area of up to 26.66 square kilometers, and its navigation channel spans 18 kilometers, which can accommodate large ships of under 100,000 tons.
BONUS EXERCISE不是都放兩個禮拜?
這次是從4/25-4/29，時間有些短。
To Mary:
Sorry, it is indeed a bit shorter this time!
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