S4A 1094303052 Betty HuangLife suffers from many desires--karma in caused by many desires.
F4A Jo Shen 1094301004 沈奕君People suffer from the desire. We often make karma when we order about by the desire.
F4A 1094301013 MayLife suffers from desires. People often make karma by desires.
Suffering is caused by endless desire. People often make bad karma by desire.
G4A 1094302015 Lianne LiOften suffered from greed. People are caused by greed and make karma.
To Brenda,1. "life suffers from many desires."是逐字翻譯，不適用於此。"We suffer from desires, and we cause karma because of desires."2. "...in caused by..." does not look correct.
To Joe,1. "...the desire" is not a good use....PEOPLE SUFFER FROM DESIRES.泛指所有慾望時，無須用the2. I don't undertand what "order about" is.
To May,"make karma by..." is not a good use.by 有"藉著"的意思，不是用於此。
F4A . Yu En . 1094301044Plenty of desires make us suffer , and they lead us to cause karma.
To Carol,"People often make bad karma by desire." is not quite correct. It sounds like 我們藉著多欲而造業。
To Lianna,"Often suffered from greed. People are caused by greed and make karma." There are grammar errors in the above sentence. In addition, the latter sentence sounds like: 我們是由貪婪所造成，因而會造業。
To Yu,"and they lead us to cause karma." sounds like: 多欲引導我們去造業。"AND DESIRES LEAD TO KARMA." sounds better."lead to something" or "lead to V+ing"
F4A 1094301040 Life suffers from desires.We often make karma because of desires
"order about"驅使、差遣
Unlimited desire could cause more disaster than delights. More desire more disaster.
G4B 1094302074 Bessy ChangLife suffers from desires. People always commit sins because they covet for everything.
徐于婷1094302078Humans are suffering from many temptations--Humans are often lured by desires to do what they cannot do.
1094301002 F4A Jennywe suffer from desires,and desires lead people to karma.
life always suffer from their uncountable desires,and people always make karma by desires.
Group6/S4A/1094303009/Mary Chang/仉政仁Suffering is caused by endless desire. The desire we create often generates bad karma.
Desires harms life. -- For desire people have made a lot of Sin.
G4B 1094302096People suffer from ceaseless desires , which make us to commit bad karma.
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S4A 1094303052 Betty Huang
Life suffers from many desires--karma in caused by many desires.
F4A Jo Shen 1094301004 沈奕君
People suffer from the desire. We often make karma when we order about by the desire.
F4A 1094301013 May
Life suffers from desires. People often make karma by desires.
Suffering is caused by endless desire. People often make bad karma by desire.
G4A 1094302015 Lianne Li
Often suffered from greed. People are caused by greed and make karma.
To Brenda,
1. "life suffers from many desires."是逐字翻譯，不適用於此。
"We suffer from desires, and we cause karma because of desires."
2. "...in caused by..." does not look correct.
To Joe,
1. "...the desire" is not a good use.
...PEOPLE SUFFER FROM DESIRES.
泛指所有慾望時，無須用the
2. I don't undertand what "order about" is.
To May,
"make karma by..." is not a good use.
by 有"藉著"的意思，不是用於此。
F4A . Yu En . 1094301044
Plenty of desires make us suffer , and they lead us to cause karma.
To Carol,
"People often make bad karma by desire." is not quite correct. It sounds like 我們藉著多欲而造業。
To Lianna,
"Often suffered from greed. People are caused by greed and make karma."
There are grammar errors in the above sentence. In addition, the latter sentence sounds like: 我們是由貪婪所造成，因而會造業。
To Yu,
"and they lead us to cause karma." sounds like: 多欲引導我們去造業。
"AND DESIRES LEAD TO KARMA." sounds better.
"lead to something" or "lead to V+ing"
F4A 1094301040
Life suffers from desires.We often make karma because of desires
"order about"
驅使、差遣
Unlimited desire could cause more disaster than delights. More desire more disaster.
G4B 1094302074 Bessy Chang
Life suffers from desires. People always commit sins because they covet for everything.
徐于婷1094302078
Humans are suffering from many temptations--Humans are often lured by desires to do what they cannot do.
1094301002 F4A Jenny
we suffer from desires,and desires lead people to karma.
life always suffer from their uncountable desires,and people always make karma by desires.
Group6/S4A/1094303009/Mary Chang/仉政仁
Suffering is caused by endless desire. The desire we create often generates bad karma.
Desires harms life. -- For desire people have made a lot of Sin.
G4B 1094302096
People suffer from ceaseless desires , which make us to commit bad karma.
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