2009年3月29日 星期日

Reference Translation for Exercise 3 (movie caption)

龍虎門 Dragon-Tiger School

火雲邪神
Sir (Master)!
羅剎女,馬坤的表現一向都不過失,所以我決定跟他繼續合作,把羅剎令交給他
Rosa, Ma Kun has always done a good job. So I decide to continue our cooperation. Give him our Loucha (Demon) Token, and ask him to keep up his work.
你要記住,羅剎令,就代表羅剎門
Remember, Loucha (Demon) Token represents Loucha (Demon) Gang.
我已經把羅剎令交給你了,如果出了什麼事,你就要負上所有的責任
I’ve given you the Lousa (Demon) Token. Don’t let anything happen to it.
這個我知道,我一定會盡力的
I know. I’ll do my best.

這麼巧?你還記不記得我?
What a small world! Still remember me?
對呀!
Yeah! You’re…
原來你還記得我!
So, you still remember me!
那個時候…我們上五年級
Grade fifth?
什麼五年級?是三年級
No, it’s third grade.
差不多啦
Whatever.
怎麼會差不多呢?你的記性也太差啦。還記不記得我們班上那個小胖子?
Not at all. What a poor memory. Remember the fatty in our class?
記得,是整天哭的那個胖子嘛
Sure, the one who cried all the time?
不是哭,是經常尿褲子
No, he wetted his pants.
那尿完褲子不就哭了嘛,我記得他喜歡揪妳辮子的
Well, he would cry after he wetted his pants. I remember he liked pulling your pigtail (ponytail).
怎麼會啊,我小時候是短頭髮啊
It couldn’t be? I had short hair then.
我記得你是長頭髮的
I remember you had long hair.
我是長髮短髮,我會不記得啊?你會不會不記得你叫陳小強啊?
How can (could) I forget I had short hair? Like, don’t you forget your name is Charlie Chen?
現在是誰的記性差啊?我不是陳小強,梁小慧
Look, who has a poor memory now (who is a muddlehead)? I am not Charlie Chen, Mary Liang..
我都不叫梁小慧
I ‘ve never been Mary Liang.
不好意思 不好意思
I’m sorry. Sorry.
那你叫什麼名字
Then, what’s your name?
王小虎
Tiger Wang.
我叫馬小靈
I’m Angela Ma.

喂!
Hey!
大師兄!
Tiger
今天怎麼這麼多人!
Why so many people here?
當然啦,上面那層全被馬坤他們包了,所以就沒位子了
Well, Ma Kun has booked the whole upper floor, so there’s no seat up there.
馬坤是全香港最有勢力的老大,上面那幫黑衣人都是他的手下
Ma is the biggest head gangster in Hong Kong. Those in black are his dogs (followers).
一班穿白衣的人衝進來了,他們是白獅幫的,勢力跟馬坤差不多
See! Some guys in white are barging (bursting; rushing) in! They are White Llions, as powerful as Ma.
黑也好,白也好,還不都是壞人,有什麼了不起
Black or white, all are bad guys – people of the same ink.

馬坤,你又拿到羅剎令了,全世界的走私生意都是你的
Ma Kun, so you got the Loucha token again. Now you have a monopoly over all the smuggling biz.
跟羅剎門合作,當然要講實力了。獅子啊,你真的要花點心思
You gotta to have actual strength to work with Loucha (Demon) Gang. Lion, you should have worked harder.
實力?我早就超過你了,生意我不想跟你搶,利益我要分一半
Strength? I’ve got much more than you. Well, I don’t want to scramble (compete) for your biz, but I want half of your gains.
你真會開玩笑。誰有羅剎令,誰就得到所有走私的利益
You’re kidding or what? Whoever gets the Token can get all the gains.
分一半給你?你沒事吧!
Your want half? You outta (out of) your mind?

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hsupon 提到...

第三組 (sorry, we posted late...)

龍虎門 Heroes School

火雲邪神
Fiery Master
羅剎女,馬坤的表現一向都不過失,所以我決定跟他繼續合作,把羅剎令交給他
你要記住,羅剎令,就代表羅剎門
Rosa, Ma Kun never fails down, so I decide to cooperate with him, and give him the Rosa Plaque.
Remember, the Rosa Plaque represents the Rosa Gang.
我已經把羅剎令交給你了,如果出了什麼事,你就要負上所有的責任
I’ve given it to you. If you got any trouble, you have to take all responsibility for the event.
這個我知道,我一定會盡力的
I know that. I will do my best.

這麼巧?你還記不記得我?
What a small world! Still remember me?
對呀!
Sure!
原來你還記得我!
Yes, you do!
那個時候…我們上五年級
Grade fifth?
什麼五年級?是三年級
Not fifth grade. It was third grade.
差不多啦
It’s about the same.
怎麼會差不多呢?你的記性也太差啦。還記不記得我們班上那個小胖子?
Not at all! Your memory is poor. Did you remember the fat guy in our class?
記得,是整天哭的那個胖子嘛
Sure, the fat guy was crying all the time.
不是哭,是經常尿褲子
Not crying, he often wetted his pants.
那尿完褲子不就哭了嘛,我記得他喜歡揪妳辮子的
He cried after wetted his pants. I remember he liked pulling your braids.
怎麼會啊,我小時候是短頭髮啊
How come, when I was a little girl I had short hair.
我記得你是長頭髮的
But I remember you had long hair.
我是長髮短髮,我會不記得啊?你會不會不記得你叫陳小強啊?
I do not remember I had long hair. Would you forget you are Chen- Shiou -Chiang?
現在是誰的記性差啊?我不是陳小強,梁小慧
What are you talking about? I am not Chen- Shiou -Chiang, Lian- Shiou -Huei.
我都不叫梁小慧
I am not Liang - Shiou -Huei.
不好意思 不好意思
那你叫什麼名字
Sorry, and what is your name?
王小虎
Wang-Shiou-Hu.
我叫馬小靈
My name is Ma -Shiou -Ling.

喂!
Hey!
大師兄!
Tiger
今天怎麼這麼多人!
Why so many people here today?
當然啦,上面那層全被馬坤他們包了,所以就沒位子了
Ma Kun has reserved the all upper floor, so there is no seat.
馬坤是全香港最有勢力的老大,上面那幫黑衣人都是他的手下
Ma Kun is the kingpin in Hong Kong. The dudes in black are his gangsters.
一班穿白衣的人衝進來了,他們是白獅幫的,勢力跟馬坤差不多
some dudes in white are rushing in here!
They are White Lions as powerful as Ma Kun.
黑也好,白也好,還不都是壞人,有什麼了不起
Black or white, they are still bad guys. It's nothing special.

馬坤,你又拿到羅剎令了,全世界的走私生意都是你的
Ma Kun, you got the Plaque again. You have monopoly over smuggling businesses.
跟羅剎門合作,當然要講實力了。獅子啊,你真的要花點心思
實力?
To cooperate with Rosa Gang is based on strength. Lion, you have to work harder.
我早就超過你了,生意我不想跟你搶,利益我要分一半
Strength? I got much more than you. I don’t want to compete with your businesses, but I want half of your profits.
你真會開玩笑。誰有羅剎令,誰就得到所有走私的利益
Are you kidding? Whoever gets the Plaque can get all the profits.
分一半給你?你沒事吧!
Give you 50%? Are you losing mind?